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The bar chart illustrates the changes in visitor numbers to three Australian coastal holiday destinations—Brighton, Surfers Paradise, and Bondi Beach—over an 11-year period, from 2010 to 2020.
| Feature | Example from the report | | :--- | :--- | | | "The bar chart illustrates..." (instead of "The chart shows...") | | Overview (most important) | "Overall, while Brighton rose, Surfers Paradise declined. Bondi remained the most visited." | | No opinion | Only facts and data comparisons. | | Comparisons / contrasts | "nearly twice the number", "in contrast", "by a considerable margin" | | Accurate data | Specific numbers (150,000, 60,000, etc.) | | Correct tenses | Past tense (since 2010 is finished time). | ielts up com
By 2020, the trends had become more pronounced. Brighton’s tourist numbers continued to climb, hitting 120,000, which was a 50% increase from its 2010 level. In contrast, Surfers Paradise hit a low of just 40,000 visitors. Bondi Beach recovered from its 2015 dip to finish at 160,000 tourists, thus maintaining its position as the top resort by a considerable margin. The bar chart illustrates the changes in visitor
